Grudge part 1 [By sourcreampie]

grudge part 1

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Welcome to the community!

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good start though sad

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amazing

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There is no fate for fluffies, for them, all members of the species are paying for their original sin…

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Welcome to Fluffycommunity! What a heartfelt piece of tragedy to get started. :blush:

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What was their original sin? Being created by humans?

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The greatest sin of all is the denial of the truth; the denial of the cold realty where many struggle to find some semblance of ashes to keep them warm.

The original sin of the fluffies is in their design; to appeal to the masses as no more than a defect product, incapable of freeing themselves of this label put on them by their creators or to break free of the conditioning deep ingrain of their genes; a conditioning so deep that make them believe in an illusion of innocence, the same as a kid who doesn’t know the rules of existence; A illusion they would die to protect.

Even if one of the species learn; even if a herd learn about their own shortcoming, nothing will ever change; just like a drop of water in the ocean. They are bound by this curse that was put on them by their faulty creators; Humans that, blinded by hubris and greed, created the chimeric life know as fluffy; a life form that doesn’t belong.

Their original sin was life in itself and the status they receive with it; was the curse they receive from their creators, a curse that make them be seen as less than a life form, but as soap; the curse of the mind and soul.

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Welcome to the community! Your art is great!

Good start of a story. Will the mare survive or not and what will happen to the foal in the future?
Good story plots for part two.