Welcome to the community!
good start though sad
There is no fate for fluffies, for them, all members of the species are paying for their original sin…
Welcome to Fluffycommunity! What a heartfelt piece of tragedy to get started.
What was their original sin? Being created by humans?
The greatest sin of all is the denial of the truth; the denial of the cold realty where many struggle to find some semblance of ashes to keep them warm.
The original sin of the fluffies is in their design; to appeal to the masses as no more than a defect product, incapable of freeing themselves of this label put on them by their creators or to break free of the conditioning deep ingrain of their genes; a conditioning so deep that make them believe in an illusion of innocence, the same as a kid who doesn’t know the rules of existence; A illusion they would die to protect.
Even if one of the species learn; even if a herd learn about their own shortcoming, nothing will ever change; just like a drop of water in the ocean. They are bound by this curse that was put on them by their faulty creators; Humans that, blinded by hubris and greed, created the chimeric life know as fluffy; a life form that doesn’t belong.
Their original sin was life in itself and the status they receive with it; was the curse they receive from their creators, a curse that make them be seen as less than a life form, but as soap; the curse of the mind and soul.
Welcome to the community! Your art is great!
Good start of a story. Will the mare survive or not and what will happen to the foal in the future?
Good story plots for part two.